cambridge book review

Four poems by Sarah Busse

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This Bed

The milk paint cannot be stripped from the wood,
rusts deeper into the grain with every year
as blood will stain a sheet, or fall, a hill.

This bed is all land, fertile and farmed, square
as an Iowa field and heavy with its burdens.

Not our first bed, that narrow dorm cot,
nor second, the handy frame you hammered for me.
This bed I dreamed my girlhood in becomes

our third, charmed and lucky, high
off the floor, a house’s secrets stowed between its legs:

a solid, home-carved trestlework, a fastness
made for a farmer’s bride two hundred years ago.
I think it filled her two-room house.

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The Dreamer

We sailed around the world.
We sailed to land in Rome—
Now why would a pagan like me
Harbor a dream of Rome?

The next time it was your house.
(Again it was us two.)
And all the songbirds maimed—
I don’t remember more.

If I could have run away,
If I could have run, I’d run.
But I couldn’t, no, I couldn’t—
In a dream you never can.

A daughter’s cry awoke me,
Another call to love.
And as I tried to answer her
My legs still wouldn’t move.

If I could have run to her
If I could have run, I’d run.
But I couldn’t, and I cannot—
From a dream you never can.

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Two Postcards to Sylvia

1.

I rise quietly to work in the still-dark dawn.
Like you. I do not love easily or well. Ardor
is a different matter.

Years ago in a dream the grass spoke to me,
saying You must find an
other way. Minus extremity’s rigid torque.

I am walking that way now, though I know
the moon desires her own devoted, grown
to reflect the shattered brilliance of the eye’s round.

2.

I tell you this shard of a dream to hold myself
by your ear, to keep from falling to the mud:
You, a white giant frozen

mid-stride into momentary flares of a storm.
Me, a tree-frog climbing, sticky-toed and soft,
up your marble thigh, along an arm. You were

not perfected. No, terribly not perfected.
Interrupted, there in the freezing mud.
Glaring into light that soaks us both.

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A Wish for the Bride and Groom

The spring wind is a wedding guest
Strewing flowers across the grass,
Preparing the way for the bride and groom,
The lovely two who shall come to pass.

May all those I have loved, or ever
Wished to love, be at peace,
And your lives fill with grace
As this kind wind billows the sail

To carry us gently home.

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Sarah Busse is the co-editor of Verse Wisconsin. She has two chapbooks out, Quiver (Red Dragonfly Press, 2009) and Given These Magics (Finishing Line Press, 2010). She lives in Madison with her husband and two children.

March 30, 2009 Posted by | poetry | , , , , | Leave a comment

Tuned Droves

By Eric Baus
Octopus Books 2008

Reviewed by Bob Wake

Denver-based poet Eric Baus has a style and a lexicon uniquely his own. It’s a poetry that feels free-associative but never arbitrary, rigorous in its use of recurring images and themes, and playful in a way that invites rather than discourages reader engagement. Tuned Droves at times takes on the dreamlike quality of a whimsical bestiary hovering between the symbolic and the three-dimensional, as in “The Convex Vulture Unearths Ventricles”: “The vulture continually recovers but its chambers are no longer its / own. Other barriers to circulation, such as the plural swan and its / apprentice, the spoon, dissolve in separate spheres.”

Or this, from “His Illuminated Ear”: “The new peacocks are known for speaking slowly in small, looping / script. It is my duty to look away from their fluorescent beaks …”

Forged of a weirdly original blend of surrealism and linguistics, Baus’s work rewards both diligent and casual readers. Like eavesdroppers parachuted into an alternate universe or a mythical kingdom, we listen and watch for the patterns and repetitions that uncover a sympathetic correspondence within ourselves. Always lurking is the niggling suspicion that we’ve never left home: we’re seeing our own world stripped to sinew and bone courtesy of Baus’s x-ray vision. Here, for example, are two sentences, a small prose poem, the sole entry in a section of Tuned Droves titled “The Sudden Sun”: “When a boy’s mouth collapses into itself, tiny flames release from his / limbs. Although this is a small flash, he is startled by the sudden / sun.” Baus is especially good at capturing the profound immediacy of childhood, when self-consciousness is innocent and fresh, when every new insight feels like the universe opening up for us.

The seven brief untitled poems that comprise the section “I Know the Letters This Way” seem to emanate from a lyric voice in the process of becoming: “… I / was born and then I learned to swim and then I learned how to pro- / nounce the letters of the alphabet …” Water, amniotic and primordial, is both source and classroom: “I saw a blank. Then waves.” Archetypal figures with names like “Mrs. Hand” and “Miss Toy” and “a man whose name was a buckle” enter the slipstream of the poet’s consciousness: “They were born when they learned how to swim.” There is talk of an “accident,” perhaps one of those Gnostic incarnations beloved of Harold Bloom, humanity born into the lower, corrupt realm that is our lot on Earth. Poet as accidental tourist. Whatever the origin or outcome of the “accident,” Baus seems to suggest that we are redeemed through our connectedness to one another. “We have similar streams,” the emerging poet declares.

Elemental images appear and reappear throughout Tuned Droves—paper, wheat, bees, tongues, rain/water, sun, snow, swimming, man/woman/boy, speaking, singing—totems from a subterranean liturgy. An oracular voice surfaces in some of Baus’s poems, trance-like incantations of a prophet/scientist (Pascal, say, or Swedenborg), as in “The Emergence of a Wolf”: “The bee’s stinger is like an enclosed, dark tongue. The atonal tortoise / is a kind of dictionary in reverse. To see them is to feel one’s teeth / become abstract. They survive as obstacles to grammar and song. / They do not, then, accept the vibrations in an ear, for example, as proof of / sound. The drama of their wavelengths occurs just before the emer- / gence of a wolf …”

When Baus is firing on all cylinders there is an aching, psalm-like beauty to his work that is mystical yet emphatically concrete in its yearning, its humanness. The short poem “Inside Any Good Song Someone is Lost” is a small masterpiece of this form seemingly invented and perfected in the wondrously strange pages of Tuned Droves: “There is a splash. There is another splash. There is another. There is a / man a man two women a boy and a boy. Something else. Someone / else. I can’t see past the wheat and birds I can’t see. There is a singer. / Is there a second singer? There is. That is, you can record yourself from / the center of a parade. The clouds are large. You are little and the / clouds are so large.”

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Bob Wake is editor of Cambridge Book Review.

March 13, 2009 Posted by | poetry | , | Leave a comment